Much as the argument between repetition and redundancy, If I were to make for myself a mental inventory
Of the attributes that hold for me the most appeal
Your characteristics would fail to meet vital criteria
Yet,
I feel entranced,
as though
you
have put
a trance on me.
You fill my senses with participles and pronouns
Conjunctions of spirits, infinitive as to sound
Verbal liquor I want to taste, willfully drink down
Languishing on phrasal flirtations,
A fusion of two minds, surprised to have found.
Tone inflections ever linger, as I contemplate how it is
I could be so enamored with simple adjectives.
Whispering emotions between strings of font and rhetoric
Though I try desperately to remain complacent
I've resolved that it's an action of futility.
As no matter how many sentences I formulate
Instructing my heart to keep you at a distance emotionally,
In the end,
I still want you desperately.
The torque of this magnetized poetry
Has me in the grips of colloquial tormentry
Yet I must admit,
that your diction feels
so
damn
good to me.
Sunday, November 22, 2009
COLLOQUIAL TORMENTRY
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Excellent! I like the tension between the bombastic and the colloquial, the logic and the emotion.
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